Chapter 008 - I'm asking you to praise me.

　　Write a story, first of all to write an outline, sorted out a good vein, in the pen to repair the details, this is also Li Da's habit. 　　High school writing that will be Li Da is never written outline, but then write the length of a million net article, do not write an outline, in front of the pit dug, write write their own forget. 　　This is also very normal, the author to write a million words length of the text, usually three or four months, which is still considered to be a fast update, and readers if a party to cultivate immortality, a few days will be able to read the end. 　　So sometimes readers will ask the author soul torture: do you still remember Xia Yuhe at Daming Lake? 　　Anyway, write the persona first. 　　Li Da decided to write a female-oriented text, since it is for teenagers, then, the element of romance must be there. 　　But a one man, one woman romance is nothing to touch the heart, and that's when two male protagonists are needed. 　　Love triangles are the way to go. 　　The female protagonist's persona has to be immersive, while the male protagonist is different, how good it is. 　　Li Da pondered for a while, then wrote down the settings on the paper. 　　Male one, handsome, rich, indifferent on the outside, fiery on the inside, the only one who loves the female lead to the bone, but is too twisted to say it. 　　Well, this kind of setting girls like, in fact, this persona for a different gender is the same, female, beautiful, rich, indifferent appearance, inner fire, love the male lead to the bone, but a haughty. 　　Everything focuses on the top condition, beautiful. 　　Then there's the male second, at least one that can be competitive with the male first, handsome first, gentle, sunny and outgoing, understanding, also loves the female lead. 　　The characters are the essence of the story, the setting is done, and it's time to start tossing their triangle. 　　Male first because of poor expression, so the female lead does not know each other's good feelings, and then male one male two and female lead became very good friends, and then the feelings warmed up, male two found that male one also like the female lead, but do not dare to say, male one also know that male two like the female lead. 　　The female lead is the only one in the room who is naturally dumb. 　　And male one because of a reason that can be made up at random causes him to have a cold personality, repeatedly retreat, and male two sensed the crisis, early A out, the female lead under the confusion, the male two also have a good feeling, so the two became lovers. 　　Then the next, is the male one pain, and friends fall out, thus letting the female lead know their true love is male one, but male one in order not to hurt the feelings of his friends, decided to go abroad to study. 　　Although the going abroad stunt has been used badly in the future, it does work quite well. 　　But on the night before she leaves the country, the female lead who decides to face her feelings finds the male lead, and then both of them vent their emotions fiercely, know each other's feelings, and then some indescribable things happen. 　　In the grand finale, the male is still out of the country, and the female lead with guilt tells the male second things, and then the two of them together to send the male out of the country. 　　What happened to the second man and the female lead in the end, do not have to explicitly say, leave a suspense is the best. 　　After reading the outline, Li Da is basically satisfied. 　　The story contains the intense conflict of love and friendship, as well as green, more importantly, in the end, none of them get a good ending. 　　The so-called tragedy is to destroy the good things for people to see, Li Da still understands it very well, this story is certainly no problem! 　　However, the sense of immediacy seemed a bit strong. 　　Li Da got excited, and with the pen in hand, he started to take a pile of letter paper and began to write. 　　Exercise book grid is too small, and turn the page will be more trouble, Li Da has thought about it, when writing a good manuscript, or to delete and correct, and then wait for vacation to go to the Internet cafe to hit the keyboard to record up, before this, is certainly to be more than one revision. 　　Luo Dongqing began to watch Li Da from the time he started to write the outline. 　　The main is also bored, listening to the class and do not want to listen, play the phone is also meaningless, sleep also sleep enough, so I had to pass the time, this pass, will see Li Da in the non-stop writing and drawing, but also occasionally show people do not understand the smile. 　　What is this doing? 　　Li Da has entered the realm of forgetfulness, literary ideas, pen like flying, class, Li Da did not leave the classroom, and then the class is a history class, Li Da got up a little, and then continue to write. 　　Until the end of the history class, Li Da finally put down the pen. 　　Don't ask, ask is a sore hand. 　　And after estimating the number of words he had written, it was probably just over a thousand words. 　　High school students usually give a piece of eight hundred words of composition preparation time is an hour, Li Da this is already considered fast, but recalling the days of having a keyboard, Li Da was heartbroken. 　　He expected this story to be written at least twenty to thirty thousand words, all written with a pen, that is also too painful ...... 　　But there was no way, who let him not have a keyboard? 　　Handwriting efficiency is indeed very low, but Li Da has no other way. 　　And looking at Li Da stopped the pen, Luo Dongqing then stared at the manuscript in Li Da's hand, and did not speak, just looked. 　　Li Da felt a little funny and said, "Want to see?" 　　Luo Dongqing nodded. 　　"Take a look and evaluate it by the way." 　　"Thanks." 　　Luo Dongqing gladly took it and looked at it word by word. 　　Although it was a draft, Li Da's writing wasn't bad, some of the words might not be very recognizable, but it wasn't hard to judge the meaning when combined with the preceding and following text. 　　However, it was a bit short. 　　Luo Dongqing looked at it with great interest, and when he saw the place where he stopped writing, he felt irritated again. 　　Wanted to read the back, but, Li Da obviously hadn't written yet. 　　And as Li Da had been waiting for her comment, Luo Dongqing returned the draft to him and said, "It's quite interesting, but the male is a bit annoying." 　　The male second hadn't appeared yet, and Luo Dongqing was spitting on the male first. 　　It seems that Luo Dongqing doesn't like that kind of domineering and cold type of male, nowadays a lot of little girls are into this one, the female frequency even created a vocabulary specifically for this kind of male lead. 　　Evil Impetuous. 　　This word and horrible as hell occupy the rivers and mountains of the men's and women's channels respectively. 　　Li Da wore a smile and didn't mind this comment. 　　Luo Dongqing added, "I think you're writing this plot in an unreasonable way, the male lead is so cold and impolite, the female lead is still caring for him patiently, it's too unrealistic, people like the male lead don't have friends in reality." 　　Li Da's smile gradually stiffened, he didn't bother discussing the plot with Luo Dongqing, instead he asked, "Do you know which two kinds of readers an author loves and hates respectively?" 　　Luo Dongqing hadn't reacted yet, so he asked blankly, "Which two kinds?" 　　"One kind, the ones who post comments after reading, pointing out the inadequacies here and there, and how it should be written, and the other kind, the ones who only say that the writing is good." 　　Hearing this, Luo Dongqing immediately understood, and couldn't help but look at Li Da with wide eyes, hummed heavily, and then organized Li Da's manuscript and gently placed it on his desk. 　　"It was you who said for me to evaluate it!" 　　"I meant for you to find a way to compliment me." 　　"Pfft!" 　　Luo Dongqing, who was originally a bit angry, didn't hold back her laughter. 　　Authors, are they all so real?